Your achievements are good
Good manners are better
An endless competition
When we can celebrate together
When you only care about
What you have to say
I will stop caring about
What you have to say
You do to others what you hate
Self-awareness is an unheard trait
Open the gate
Don’t let that become your fate
Love is a game of give and take
Rise from your slumber, awake
Is it not time to play
This wonderful game?
When you look outside of yourself
You’ll find a whole world
That you’ve missed
You’ll find that your ignorance wasn’t bliss
To take and to take
Is to exhaust
To give and to take
Brings rewards
Come and open the door
Is it not
True love and friendship
That you are waiting for?
Sophia Ismaa
Sofearless 
Wonderful ending for this lovely poem.
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Thank you, that means a lot coming from you! ☺️
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You are too sweet. It was my pleasure.
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That’s beautiful Sophia.
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Thank you! ❤️
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Awesome. I second your thought. Loved it ❤️
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Thank you! ❤️
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My pleasure
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A really great poem, I enjoy the “call to action” in the last stanza.
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Thank you, I’m so glad you’ve noticed that and enjoyed it. ☺️
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I love this! It reminds me of something I wrote on my page. Thanks for the follow as well, and keep doing what you’re doing 🙌🏽🙌🏽
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Oh and if you want you check out the post here: https://oukasnat.wordpress.com/2018/05/28/give-no-take/ 😊
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Thank you! 🙂
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Everything about this poem is beyond perfect ✨. How effortlessly it flows on, and that shows how much effort you’ve put into it 🙂.
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Thank you, that means so much to me! ❤️
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It’s my pleasure really! You really have created a beautiful blog *_*
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You are so lovely, thank you again and right back at you, your poetry is beautiful. ☺️
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Thank you so much ❤️. It means a lot to me. *_*
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Beautifully penned!❤
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Thank you! ☺️💖
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